Hi Guys, Just want to let you know that I have been writing a story. But due to my busy schedule (chos!) and writer's block thingy I wasn't able to continue it. I have written 8 chapters so far. I have published it on my first blog that I closed for some reasons. I want to continue it. Let me share the first few chapters that I have written and from there I want to hear your comments and tell me what you want me to add on it or something......
Let me give you the preview first and then I'm going to share the first few chapters one or two each week.
Thank you in advance.
She was sitting next to me... cold..aloof...
She was staring outside the window... holding her big purse....long black curly hair...brown skin
She was humming a song ... i don't know why this girl got my attention...
I could see the reflection of her face on the window... small, round face...glistening eyes...I was not so particular about what I was seeing, but then...Something pulled me to stare...It's not just her eyes that's remarkable...Those lips...She was wearing a bright pink lipstick...
I am Rashaád this is how our story unfolded... me and the GIRL WITH A PINK LIPSTICK
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... this is a very challenging story. I am writing in a man's perspective... thinking about the flow and the scene just driving me crazy...
I really do pray that i can finish it... Thank you so much Ms. Janet Colie and my Snuggle Bear (bf) . my two wonderful editors :) ... you guys are the best... Hope you will like it.....
~genskie~
Let me give you the preview first and then I'm going to share the first few chapters one or two each week.
Thank you in advance.
She was sitting next to me... cold..aloof...
She was staring outside the window... holding her big purse....long black curly hair...brown skin
She was humming a song ... i don't know why this girl got my attention...
I could see the reflection of her face on the window... small, round face...glistening eyes...I was not so particular about what I was seeing, but then...Something pulled me to stare...It's not just her eyes that's remarkable...Those lips...She was wearing a bright pink lipstick...
I am Rashaád this is how our story unfolded... me and the GIRL WITH A PINK LIPSTICK
________________________________________________________________________
... this is a very challenging story. I am writing in a man's perspective... thinking about the flow and the scene just driving me crazy...
I really do pray that i can finish it... Thank you so much Ms. Janet Colie and my Snuggle Bear (bf) . my two wonderful editors :) ... you guys are the best... Hope you will like it.....
~genskie~
wow, interesting!! you are writing a book, and the title is already very interesting.. all the best in continuing your work!! :)
ReplyDeleteSino kaya ang girl with a pink lipstick? parang a girl with the green scarf. Okay ah, pano ka kukuha ng ilang points of view from a guy?
ReplyDeletenagtatanong ako sa mga guy friends ko at ka y Bf.... at sayo na din hehehe... Can you help me?
DeleteWow! You're writing a book?! Good for you!
ReplyDeleteSupport you here ;))
people have opinions, but you must write what is in your heart. You have challenged yourself by writing from a man's (certain type of course) perspective. This is exciting! Keep going!
ReplyDeletewell you can do it genskie
ReplyDeleteanyways mukang oky sya preview pa lang navivisualize ko na
looking forward on reading those
pink na pink lipstick! hmm. hehe
ReplyDeletewow ate, go go go with the book.
Good luck Genskie. Looking forward to read the whole book:)
ReplyDeleteWay to go, Genskie!
ReplyDeletecan't wait to read the rest! best of luck with in ding inspiration - writing a book is a big challenge!
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Ill read the next chap gen pag me time na ako. Kakagising ko lang. Parang exciting to ah. Parang ikaw lang kasi me red lips ka lageh. Hehehe
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